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I live in New York and I love it sometimes . I live near Times Square in a huge and lovely apartment . I like to see the sights of the city, but most of all I love the Times Square . I take the train to work because I don´t have a license to drive a car . It´s not nice to take the train because it´s always full when I am there . The train always smells not so good of urine and food . While walking on the streets you can hear loud and honking Taxis; the kids laughing; the click of heels and the sound of a bussinesman yelling into his phone . But I have so many to tell about touch . First is that you can touching the turnstile to get in to the subway; your legs are touching the seat of a taxi and the warmth of slice of pizza in your hands . All of these things become that special touch of New York. New York is visually stunning, defined by people and the buildings. The buildings are very high, beautiful and looks extraordinary . The giant trees in Central Park are beautiful . The rowboats and the ice skating in Central Park are also very beautiful . The view from the top of Rockeffeler center is fabolous and better than the Empire State Building . The street carts are pretty . The Times Square at night is spectacular .
Everything here is beautiful .

New York, I love u .